Bad Poetry Friday

Crazy (c. 1994)

The world is spinning fast

She doesn’t think she’ll last any longer

Her smile is gone

she feels so alone

Nothing you could do or say

could chase the pain away

She snaps and screams

words hateful and obscene

She knows this feeling well

she won’t come our of her shell

The depression is sinking in

She knows she can’t win

 

Notes: I really loved using the word “obscene” in my poetry

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