Bad Poetry Friday

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Bruised (2/11/1998)

Immense red and blue bruised

her

see her tears

fall

like liquid satin

down velvet

skin

Notes: This particular atrocity is brought to you by a magnetic poetry set.

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  1. I finally lugged out the bag of journals/notebooks so I can join in on your BPF! I found a real upper from the same month but year of 1993:

    Control (2/11/1993)

    Thoughts of Anguish~as I lie here
    …uncontrollably sobbing
    The pain stings my soul
    & in my heart it’s throbbing

    I feel so out of control
    I long 4 control
    control of myself…power
    The wall of the world are closing
    in on me

    Soon they stop…
    But down falls a tower
    & crushes me.

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