Words Like Stones c. 2/16/1998
You bruised me with your words
attacking my innermost affections
my reaction to your abuse
was the turn of my cheek
I am humbled by creation
I have innovation
and I want to be whole
You stare at me hard
envisioning a fight
I just take a deep breath
and turn out the light
you sleep on my pillow
steal the covers in your slumber
wrap your arms around me like a blanket
you smother me with love
taking away all of my hope
I need to be accepted
love like my mother
who gave her heart to him at the age of twenty
you can love me forever
like a sister
or a lover
and I’ll seek comfort in my dreams.
“You bruised me with your words” is a vivid, startling first line. And I don’t know why you tag this as bad poetry. It’s great!
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Thank you, but that might be the only redeeming line.
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No. I didn’t mean to imply that! I just really like that particular line, like having a favorite quote from a good book.
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